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Trying to render words like some epic,
I am incapable.
The process is autonomic,
Only arriving when undesired and unwanted.

Place your eyes unto me,
I am ambiguous,
I am pretentious,
but I will tell thee,
I can write,
and I might as well damn fight.

If you choose to provoke me,
I'm too far above,
sitting in my tall tree,
I shall shove,
shove you off that unbalanced balance you so gracefully stand upon.

But I like to sit on the floor,
or even under the ground,
beneath you,
to hear the unfamiliar sounds,
that exist only in the void of my ears.

"You don't know real pain",
I'm sorry if it seems that way,
but you're the one who's living in Act II Scene III,
You're the cliché.

You bastard,
I rejected you?
I gave you the chance to deem yourself worthy,
but you couldn't even comprehend the level on which I breathe,
I toyed with your heart?
All I did was tell you I didn't care for the exterior,
and you presumed I wanted you too.

And now you feel you have the right to be angered,
to make me feel guilty and burdened,
Alas, my beloved,
I'm laughing,
and I shall never stop.
For you were nothing to me,
never will be,
because you have no personality.

I'll give you the pleasure of hearing a few ultimate words from me,
that which I abhor more than anything,
is when people lie just to fit in.
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Author's Comments

This poem is about some stupid person in my class who supposedly likes me (he doesn't even know me..He's just been in the same class as me for like two months or so), and I didn't want to reject him over nothing, so I tried to get to know him... But his personality is ten times worse than the way he looks (which I deem inhumanly impossible. Because he's ugly. I don't usually call people ugly [I call
myself ugly].. But he IS..and YOU would think that too)..

Ugh.. And I don't even care about looks, but seriously, he has NO personality. Well, he does, but it sucks. I thought he'd at least be able to comprehend the most petty things I talk about, but he doesn't. Explains why he has failed three times (he's in the same grade for the third time in a row)..

Yeah.. I just needed to vent.. So..um..yeah.

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:iconloudwisdom:
ok this is freaking brilliant "shove you off that unbalanced balance you so gracefully stand upon." that knocked the wind out of me. So brilliant. This is incredible! amazing

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Everyone feels a certain way for a reason, when you read a persons poem your glimpsing at their very soul.
:iconshinji2821:
Wow definitely a great poem. The message was perfectly clear and I could easily tell where yo were getting at. plus the rhyme scheme fit the mood. You are truly a gifted pet. try putting it on his desk sometime, see if he gets it, which by what yo say I doubt, but it would be pretty hilarious anywase

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Im a lizard at heart.
:iconshinji2821:
poet* wow bad typo

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Im a lizard at heart.
:iconsirhyde:
I can easily appreciate your desire to maim ignorant people.

This poem to me, conveyed, "I'd kill you, but honestly, you're not worth it. Leave me alone?"

Sorry, I'm in a strange mood today. Must be my sociopath-ism coming into play.

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"Never has Evil been so friendly."
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:iconabattoirxabdication:
Haha. That's EXACTLY what that poem was meant to convey. I'm glad I've met a fellow sociopath. =D I'm in a strange mood today too. Though, I'm always in a strange mood..

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DevianTART
:iconabattoirxabdication:
HAHA! I'm a gifted PET! LMAO. Nah, just kidding. I know you meant poet. =P Though, the first time I saw it, I thought..WTF does he mean by PET? Is that some kind of a metaphor for something else? xD Oh, I can be so stupid sometimes. But not as stupid as SOMEONE else.

Oh yeah, and he happened to tell everyone we were going out. HAHAHAHA. Asshole. You know what, I think I just might put that poem on his desk. He'd probably just cry because the words will be too complex for his non-existent brain.

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DevianTART
:iconabattoirxabdication:
HAHAHA. Thank you! =D

I like your poetry a lot. You've posted a lot recently, but I haven't had the time to read it all. But I've read some. And I love it. =D

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DevianTART
:iconsirhyde:
And they say we're a danger to other people.

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"Never has Evil been so friendly."
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Pfffft.. They don't know anything. THEY'RE a danger to us.

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